Ohio Impromptu

“The last thing you said to him was, ‘I’m going to kill!’ And you did, so. You’re a trustworthy boy—I’m sorry he wasn’t better to you.” I'm going to kill ...

I don't suffer from Writer's Block anymore, because the block spends so much time with me that I hardly refer to myself as a writer anymore. I swear, the worst ...

There are a few clumsy sentences that make your story read a bit awkwardly, but aside from that, I see two major problems with what you have here. Firstly, the ...

I know people like to think of the 60's and 70's as a time when music was pure and perfect, but truth be told, it mostly sounded bad. The Clash ...

The thing about this story is that if there is a single thing wrong with the way it is written, the whole thing could come undone. I haven't read any ...

When you break things down into their simplest form, yes, everything is a cliche. But when is a novel ever in it's simplest form? In the blurb, maybe, but aside ...

My audience is quite a bit more limited than most. I don't see many teens or children reading the novel I'm working on. And I don't see anyone that likes ...

He said, "oh yes you can, just hold my hand. I think that that would help." So I sat with him a while, and I asked him how he felt. ...

Sam, you have to let me do this again tomorow, but right now, far past the point where lack of sleep lets me be coherent, that that was like a ...

1. Avatar: The Last Airbender 2. Doug! (OMG I had totally forgotten how much I love him) 3. Hey Arnold 4. As Told By Ginger 5. Arthur And then later, ...

I'm sorry, but I have to say that this piece was not enjoyable to read. At all. It was bland, uninteresting and poorly written. All the spelling mistakes and such ...

The article makes some good points. But like everything else with writing, there are no rules. You don't have to establish setting or characters or whatever with your first sentence; ...

"Love Will Tear Us Apart" -Joy Division

You can never do enough character work with your actors. Make sure they know the person, not just the lines. There are all kinds of things you can do with ...

Oooh. wow. Can't wait. Much appreciated. :wink: